I stumbled on exaggerations
and mimicries
where I reminisced
restrictions
imposed on caricatures
of yourself.
Author notes
Count: 15 words
A contest entry
- 15 words by Melissa Gayle.
1400 points, ended July 7, 30 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Now you tell me:
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Wonderful
Very well done. A great choice of 15 words. Congrats on the honorable mention.
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thank you
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Very much said with so few words. I liked the use of the word "caricatures" as I think it represent warped reality in our thoughts. Thanks for entering and good luck
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oh wow! i'm blown away by your words! A beautiful write! keep penning!
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thank you
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This is an interesting poem. It makes one think. Sorta sounded on the dark side and I liked that aspect. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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Starked.
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Interesting - the limitations or cropped images of the visions you once had of yourself are now viewed, recollected and seen as imitations, distortions, elaborations of you now. Very insightful. Congratulations on the HM.
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They're not of me at all.
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Very nice.
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Great work with this, one of your better quickies if I do say so myself! Brilliant word choice with a perfect flow and alliteration. What more can anyone say? Love it!
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aww, thank you
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I think this is one of the best short poems I have ever read on this site. It truly is hard to capture a meaningful, feeling piece like that, and you are excellent. Great write and I hope you place. Best of luck.
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whisper
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Thank you!
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I love it, as usual. ^.^
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Thanks
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And change your flaming fudging fecking page ~~
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hahahahahha
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Do it.
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When I find something worth saying.
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S'alright I found a way to your poems now.
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lol!
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Ahh. Good. A good short one. A very good one.
Better than most of your others. Or maybe it's just cos I haven't been here a while and forgot your talent...
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hrm. The minute I used "exaggerations" I thought of two people. One of them is you. Maybe that's why?
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Who was the other?????
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Guess. Not on here, though.
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Slagface MacMuffin?
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Yesh!
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yeah i counted... lol... i lie. umm how about "you" instead of "yourself"?
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Hrm. It'd change the meaning..
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