Never once
have I looked at the sky and thought,
'This cannot be done.'
Never once
have I proclaimed in frustration,
'Completely impossible!'
Because,
never once,
have I felt the need to.
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Eeeeeh.
Mistakes? Improvements that need to be made? Tips and tricks? I'd like some advice please.
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Effective!
I absolutely love the statement this makes ... it's so much more effective, in my opinion, than the traditional "rah rah you can do anything!" type of thing. I think you could leave this alone, or add to it if the right words came to you. It's a perfectly effective standalone piece, though. Well done =)
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Ah, thank you very much! I was a bit insecure at it being so short, but hearing that has made me feel a bit better about it.
If there is anything you think needs fixed, don't hesitate to tell me!
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