gazing through eyes
sometimes swallowed
whole by the
depth
that is found inside
the soul often
secreted in the
depths of the
eyes..
holding secrets,
whispering truths
so soft
that you strain
and fall into
them to hear it...
lost inside
eyes and windows
into the soul,
looking and searching...
Author notes
option c
soulsearching by michaelo at deviantart.com
A contest entry
- PIF Totally Random by Errant Panther.
600 points, ended July 22, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awesome piece, very deep in thought and evokes it from the reader, excellent take on the prompt image.
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wonderfukl!
I like where you took this. I think we are all searching... what the heck, it gives us something to do on the journey. The picture rocks as well.
Kj
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yeah he always finds good ones, I have done a few from picture promts that he has posted.I personally thought this one was a bit lacking though,, but that's the writer in me,not always pleased with my own work.
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Beautifully crafted and I love the spiritual tone of the piece. It flows well and read just lovely aloud. Much enjoyed this
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thank you.
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wow, this is beauiful, a truly amazing poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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thanks.
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awesomeness...
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A very nice work of art I might say, the page color scheme is great for this, and the writing is done well. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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thanks for the comment, I love picture prompts and this one is a great pic. I need to grab the artist info and add it in to the notes.
cheers
Grey
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here is your image prompt: http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s188/errantpanther/soulsearching_deviantart_bymichaelo.jpg
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thanks,
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you're welcome, I thought you'd be able to craft some magic with it.
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