tonight the angels are singing
their sad little song
someone i love is dying
and its so wrong
from a month to a year
is what they said his time will be
i know i have to be strong
but this is killing me
my father-in-law
know that im here
praying for you
through my tears
i never thought about how it would feel
to know that your dying
and no matter how much i try
i just cant quit crying
i want you at our wedding, dad
and to watch our love grow strong
it really hurts deep inside
to know your time wont be long
I WILL NOT GIVE UP HOPE
believe me, im pulling for you
all i want to hear right now
is that it isnt true
God, please here me
im down on my knees
dont take him
PLEASE
this is the first time in a while ive actually prayed, but i to save his precious life, id do anything.
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awesome and very touching
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this is absolutely beautiful. i almost cried. but i'm at school and that would make me really wierd. but i'm crying on the inside believe me.
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this is good....really good.
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Amazing.
This almost brought me to tears. It's very beautiful and emotional.
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Pix im sorry hun..
i hope daddeh gets better....
anyways i love it...
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this is a great piece of poetry, that would give others in your situation something to relate to. keep up the good work
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Omg
I about burst into tears. I really hope he comes out ok.
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good
I hope nothi8ng happens. Your writing makes me care for this person great poem
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