I close my eyes late at night
Sure enough he comes to life
I can’t stop dreaming
About this guy
Why is it I can open my soul
To a guy I don’t even know
When to the rest of the world I’m a mystery
With hopes and dreams
That no one sees.
No, my reality is just a lie
I’m a closed book,
But I don’t know why-
I can’t open myself
To anyone but me
Except for some reason
In my dreams
As he’s looks into my eyes
I want to feel his heart beat faster
I want to feel those butterflies
As we say good night
I can’t stop longing
To be in his arms
Safe from the demons
Of my heart
No, I just want to close my eyes
The sooner I do, he’ll come to life
I just can’t stop dreaming
About this guy
And I’m not sure I want to.
Author notes
This was just something a friend and I wrote together ^.^
Comments
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Excellent
This was a very deep, truthful write of someone in need, but afraid to show themselves. We all go through these periods in our life, but with courage and perseverance they pass. I loved your write. Well done, indeed. Billy Rob
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Thank you sooooo much!!!! That really means a lot!
Ash
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Ooo!!! Next time I see you you're GOING to sing it to me with the music! I know exactly how you feel though; ever since "you know who" I cant seem to open myself up to guys either Beautiful write though!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Heck no I'm not!!!! I already played you the music silly, and theres no way on monkey that I'm singing!!!!!!!!! Thanks for stopping by!
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This was excellent. I could feel the emotions behind this. Weird thing, I actually payed attention to the whole thing for once :/ Well, I mostly can't remember my dreams... or understand them. Great poem, I hope to read more from you. It'll be interesting to see different stuff from you.
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Lol! I know what you mean!!!!!! Half the time I start reading, then itll remind me of something, and then i lose intrest! ^.^ Thanks for the comment!!! Always appreciated!
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Beautiful poem full of feeling and longing. I especially love the 3rd stanza. Reminded me of the guy I've liked for almost 2 years, who unfortunately is my friend.
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thanks!
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Good write!! Dreams are always something that allow us to be open and also let us play out our fantasies when we dont know how to in reality!
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Thanks so much!
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