I just want to scream at him,
Can't he just let me go? ,
I'm not the one for him,
I'm a loner,
I hate everyone around me,
Well not everyone,
But close enough,
He is starting to bug me,
Why does he love me? ,
I hate him for loving me,
And not some other girl,
I hate him,
I hate him,
I hate him for loving me...
~Chelsea
Author notes
Ok this poem is written by my bff Chelsea and she wonders why her best guy friend is in love with her when she only loves him as a brother.
A contest entry
- HATE HATE HATE HATE by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I liked this alot. I really loved the way you said " I hate him for loving me" Good job. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck
..<3..
Shelly -
Into the mind
of another we go to scare up some cobwebs, bats and spiders. The attic is filled with the darkness of thoughts that are afraid to see the light of day. A good poet learns how to express what they feel and think. You seem to be learning how to do just that.
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That's sad when someone doesn't want someone else's love. But, I like this poem.
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