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*EXIT* door (Poetry Slam)

Come on, show me
what you’ve got in store
and on this stage I’ll
settle the score
Passion has wit
and so much more
so stand real close
to the “EXIT” door.

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  • Griswold
    August 10, 2008

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    I somehow missed this poem and your Golden entry into the slams. Very well done honey, You go girl!!! Love you sweetheart...Scott


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 24, 2008

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    Congratulations on the well-deserved Gold Award---
    Well Done!!


  • nature mithya
    July 23, 2008
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    Congrats I love this Gold for you.

    you were great.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 7, 2008
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    not bad, not bad at all. i definitely like the attitude this piece brings to the table


  • nature mithya
    July 6, 2008

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    *EXIT* door (Poetry Slam)

    YOU ARE THE 'FIRE' Passions promise.
    LOL
    CAN'T you see me flee.
    Laughs!
    But I am no coward so must stay.


  • nature mithya
    July 5, 2008
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    Take on your Exits.

    Fire fire, where will you be.
    Burning in passion,
    while I simplly flee.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    July 3, 2008
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    Strut yer stuff, sistah! Love the rhyme and attitude. girl!


  • duana
    July 3, 2008

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    wow- now this is attitude- with poetic style! I LOVE this. Favorite so far! Exactly what I'm looking for!

  • mcfreeman
    July 3, 2008
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    Slam is a 3 minute free form spoken word form


    • Freed by Mercy silver member
      July 3, 2008
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      I thought it was 2 minutes...


    • duana
      July 3, 2008
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      No, there is now such a thing called internet slamming. The world evolves and so does everything in it!!!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    If you want slammin'
    Then I'm here jammin'
    You'll hit the floor
    And not the door
    I'm not just bootin'
    Or even lootin'
    My iron will
    Is here to kill
    So no point poppin'
    Just get stoppin'
    And say good bye
    Or Yer gonna DIE!

    • nature mithya
      July 6, 2008
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      Looting yes.

      There no irons popping.
      I see a heart dropping
      In your tracks stopping
      Die-ing, what lie-ing!
      We should be trying.


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      July 3, 2008
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      s
      DAMNIT DONT ENTER THE CONTEST

      Let me have something will you..There goes my joy s
      Thanks for the comment:

      Come here schemer
      your just a dreamer
      for you'll hit the floor
      when and where
      i'll meet you there
      I will even the score
      rolling sleeves
      you will leave
      someone open the back door!
      Say goodbye my dear
      as i boot your rear
      YOUR OUT OF HERE!!!

      (Pssst love ya though)

      • duana
        July 6, 2008
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        Great practice for the slam!
        You guys certainly know how to jam!

        (Hey I am just the manager of the slam- didn't say I'd ever have the courage or ability to get on stage myself, lol- you guys rock!)

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