what you’ve got in store
and on this stage I’ll
settle the score
Passion has wit
and so much more
so stand real close
to the “EXIT” door.
Author notes
A contest entry for:
4000 thousand point contest! AP #1 2008 Slam: Sign Up Page Contest 2000 (THOUSAND POINTS NOT 300, PROMISE!)(pot has doubled people 4000 points)
From 2004 The First and GREATEST BY ALL DEMOCRACTIC AP CONSENSUS AP slam. Read ON FOR THIS YEAR's all new SLAM!!!! How to sign up: Write your own AP ginga- and make it good- that simple. Put as much
A contest entry
- 4000 thousand point contest! AP #1 2008 Slam: Sign Up Page Contest 2000 (THOUSAND POINTS NOT 300, PROMISE!)(pot has doubled people 4000 points)(POT HAS NOW TRIPLED PEOPLE!! 6,000 POINTS!!! by duana.
300 points, ended July 21, 2008, 27 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I somehow missed this poem and your Golden entry into the slams. Very well done honey, You go girl!!! Love you sweetheart...Scott


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Congratulations on the well-deserved Gold Award---
Well Done!!


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Congrats I love this Gold for you.
you were great. -
not bad, not bad at all. i definitely like the attitude this piece brings to the table

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*EXIT* door (Poetry Slam)
YOU ARE THE 'FIRE' Passions promise.
LOL
CAN'T you see me flee.
Laughs!
But I am no coward so must stay.

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Take on your Exits.
Fire fire, where will you be.
Burning in passion,
while I simplly flee. -
Strut yer stuff, sistah! Love the rhyme and attitude. girl!


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wow- now this is attitude- with poetic style! I LOVE this. Favorite so far! Exactly what I'm looking for!


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Slam is a 3 minute free form spoken word form
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I thought it was 2 minutes...
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No, there is now such a thing called internet slamming. The world evolves and so does everything in it!!!
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If you want slammin'
Then I'm here jammin'
You'll hit the floor
And not the door
I'm not just bootin'
Or even lootin'
My iron will
Is here to kill
So no point poppin'
Just get stoppin'
And say good bye
Or Yer gonna DIE!

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Looting yes.
There no irons popping.
I see a heart dropping
In your tracks stopping
Die-ing, what lie-ing!
We should be trying. -


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DAMNIT DONT ENTER THE CONTEST
Let me have something will you..There goes my joy
s
Thanks for the comment:
Come here schemer
your just a dreamer
for you'll hit the floor
when and where
i'll meet you there
I will even the score
rolling sleeves
you will leave
someone open the back door!
Say goodbye my dear
as i boot your rear
YOUR OUT OF HERE!!!
(Pssst love ya though) -
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Great practice for the slam!
You guys certainly know how to jam!
(Hey I am just the manager of the slam- didn't say I'd ever have the courage or ability to get on stage myself, lol- you guys rock!)
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