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Look At You Now

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Honey we have our quiet moments,
those days we reminisce .
Of that little girl screaming and playing beneath our feet,
Now look at you grown and still just as sweet .

Eighteen years my pride and joy my life in full bloom,
grown up and graduated from all those little toys world bound soon.
Now your off to see the world but always remember Hun,
you are always in our hearts no matter where you run .

So stand tall and be proud for darling we sure are of you today ,
and know our love surrounds you in every way.
You will always be our little girl running about ,
only today my dear be careful on your first time out .

Remember what we taught you,
and hold God near and dear to your heart.
For honey that piece of soul we gave to you at birth ,
keeps us with you where ever you are .

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Look at you now such beauty to behold . I wish you the best where ever you go

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  • writerbyaccident
    July 4

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    don't make me cry!!

    Thank you so much for this beautiful post!! It said things to me only a friend could. I appreciate the thought. The poem was gorgeous!! With your permission i would like to print this out and put it in my scrapbook!!

    Thanks,
    Danielle


  • maralisa silver member
    July 3

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    this is so beautiful and deep all of our children have to move on in life and grow up in the hope that they can move to there next journey to be the best they can in whatever path they take
    Eighteen years my pride and joy my life in full bloom,
    grown up and graduated from all those little toys world bound soon.
    Now your off to see the world but always remember Hun,
    you are always in our hearts no matter where you run .Remember what we taught you,
    and hold God near and dear to your heart.
    For honey that piece of soul we gave to you at birth ,
    keeps us with you where ever you are .good luck in the contest


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 3

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    This was just lovely. The poem is full of love for the girl. It's such a nice poem for her. =) I really enjoyed it so. Keep on writing grandma.


  • daviscth silver member
    July 3

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    Thank you so much for this wonderful poem for Danielle. The imagery is wonderful. It will mean a lot to my girl.


  • sunshinegirl
    July 3

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    What a great job!! This is so full of love, and hope for the future for this young lady! Great job my friend!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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