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Lost And Alone

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The world of today is beautiful
  yet so very dark,
People scurrying trying to leave
  their mark.
Destroying what is beautiful
  and bright,
Paying no attention to the difference
  of wrong and right.
Deep in my heart something
  has been lost,
Feeling bleak, cold like an
  early autumn frost.
All alone, having no path
  which to follow,
With misty eyes trudging
  forward to tomorrow.
Lonely, lost, desparately searching,
  hoping to find,
Contentment and peace for my
  heart and mind.

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I do feel alone at times but then most of us do.It is the trying in bringing ourselve up from this sadness that is so very hard to do.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 23

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    Have you ever asked yourself just how many of us so believes we have to do something now to bring the beauty and the sounds of nature back for life is heartbroken without it .

    This poem is me in a nutshell and yes I see many today that just goes along everyday blinded to the world about them a time in this world where money is all thats on their mind and when this world is clutching to the devils pocketbook he roars in laughter for he knows he has found a foothold that the human beings have been taught ou cant live without . Left are the children without loving memories or dreams of the future and without those life as we know it dies a slow and thoughtless death


    • Puppydog gold member
      August 23
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      HELLO PATTY

      Thanks so much for coming by to read! I can see most people here where I live look at me kind of strange as I walk with my camera and book. I usually take my camera with me on my walks and also a book that I will find some quiet and peaceful spot where I will sit down and read.'s

  • Desire gold member
    July 13

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    Wow~

    How did I miss so many of these
    Oy!!
    This one packs a Powerful message my Friend and the last two lines- just soothes the Soul
    Beautiful and Magnificent at the same time
    for there are others who could relate and finding that *happy place* to let Spirit refuel- can make a world of Difference

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 18
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      HELLO DESIRE

      Thanks ever so much for stopping by to read! 's I know I have felt this way so much and others do also. Where oh where did those beautiful times disappear to! 's

  • SilverButterfly gold member
    July 6

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    yes it is true.. its hard to want to try sometimes. wonderful pic! you seem to pick the perfect photos for your writes Puppydog Great writing again!

    SilverButterfly


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 7
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      HELLO SILVER BUTTERFLY

      Thank you from the bottom of my heart! 's One does have a terrible time overcoming their sadness and rising up to start again, but with ones inner faith and hope one can overcome and rise up to find happiness and love once again. 's

  • azlyn gold member
    July 4

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    So much truth!

    My sweet Puppy ... Your heart is a treasure so rare!

    Blessings and peace~
    Az


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 4
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      HELLO AZLYN

      Thank you ever so much!'s I am not really down and sad right now, though I do see so many around me who just go about their day doing the same things as they have always done and not finding their peace and joy. I have fallen into this at times but then I realize it and make little changes which help me so much. One must keep trying new things to find that rhythm and peace.

  • ebaby
    July 3

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    The world of today is beautiful
    yet so very dark.... this is so true, Puppydog I enjoyed your poem and tho it is sad it is how alot of up feel, I wish I didnt but I really do.... hang in there I guess that is what we have to do. hugs Vickie


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 4
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      HELLO VICKIE

      Thank you so very much! It has been such a long time since we have talked! 's I don't truly feel that bad right now but it is like with everyone at times one can get so down and feel so sad. We will have to catch up sometime! 's

  • Pisces rainbow
    July 3

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    I believe it is a soulfull feeling,

    a knowing and not knowing,

    at times it leaves a space,

    you can feel it in crowded room or when you are alone,

    impressive write

    you have captured  this feeling perfectly

    (love the photo)

    God bless my friend always


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 3
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      HELLO KATHLEEN

      Thank you ever so much for coming by to read, I am not really feeling alone right now but there are time when I do. Coming up from those feelings is hard to do and I try to be patient with people who are feeling this way.

  • Room without doors silver member
    July 3

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    Outstanding

    I know this feeling- that everything is not quite right in the world- a sense of unrest and uncertainty. You describe this sensation very well and bring it to life. There is sadly much that is wrong in this world but I know you have the inner vision to see your way through this.


    • Puppydog gold member
      July 3
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      HELLO BETH

      Thank you ever so muc for coming by to read! 's I see so many people feeling this way and it hurts me for I put myself there with them as I have felt this way often.
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