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Umbrellas

Shields of surety draping mind from life,

but in the poet's hands

they are a gaze,

a penetrable view into any storm,

willing to feel the rage,

be drenched in its deluge

where others hide from the passions

knowing the baptism brings its lightning

to strike a quill with power and fire.

 

From a seconds droplets

can come a river of profound

flowing freely to soil of those

who preferred to hide their mind

against the gold that comes

when life's gales beset the soul.

 

Tempest times awaken the sleeping muse

for those who use her as umbrella

against the nights of oblivious

in which other brains often dwell.

 

Risking the touch of fate's tears

because it refreshes

instead of drowns.

Author notes

Poem quote from Warrior Eagle's entry:
“A poet is someone who stands outside in the rain hoping to be struck by lightning.”

James Dickey quotes


QUOTES FOR CONTEST:

To imagine is everything, to know is nothing at all.
Anatole France

Who hears music feels his solitude peopled at once.
Robert Browning

History is an account, mostly false, of events, mostly unimportant, which are brought about by rulers, mostly knaves, and soldiers, mostly fools.
Ambrose Bierce


Experiences are savings which a miser puts aside. Wisdom is an inheritance which a wastrel cannot exhaust.
Karl Kraus

Reason is our soul's left hand, faith her right.
John Donne

Heroism on command, senseless violence, and all the loathsome nonsense that goes by the name of patriotism - how passionately I hate them!
Albert Einstein

Nature does nothing uselessly.
Aristotle

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  • AmyPixiDust
    July 10
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    this is a nicely refreshing poem and i love the take you have used on the quote you choose i like the feelings and the way that the rain refreshes instead of drowns, this poem speaks loudly allthough i feel a background would have added a little more, keep up the writing, ~Amy
  • A very nice piece indeed, my best wishes.


  • maralisa gold member
    July 3

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    a penetrable view into any storm,willing to feel the rage,be drenched in its delugeknowing the baptism brings its lightning to strike a quill with power and fire.Risking the touch of fate's tears
    because it refreshes instead of drowns.wonderful poem there is nothing like a nice shower to refresh the air good luck in the contest