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And the book got opened up on Thursday

 

 

 

 

She dreams of magpies

songs of one and two

sorrow and joy

 

freedom comes layered

with particles of hope

 

                           almost there

 

 

                                      when the chaos theory is spoken of-


 

 

they wont mention thursday or even friday

when her heart heals

time-bandits and bolivian rain forests will fill in the gaps

 

balls of steel worn well

and the bells rang out across the greenery

clang of the chiming clock beckons 

each second to come forth

they tick on her skin

 

deduct the fractions

& it all becomes                                          free





 

 

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  • silverfish
    July 22

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    so, back again . . . i am intrigued about the magpie symbol. but i hope it's not a sad one. is it a white bird with black, or the other way? sorrow with joy, or the other way. chiming clocks and tolling bells 'framing the fearful symmetry' of life's arch. and then to be free of it. free as a bird, maybe. thought-provoking piece. thank you. -s

  • silverfish
    July 21
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    i like this. i'm still sorting out what you do in your free time, and i promise myself that I will get to the mapie and what she might represent, but at the moment, i'm trying to work through my vexation with the well worn balls. -silverfish


  • zochit2me gold member
    July 6

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    Yes when it happens one always knows the feeling...
    The hill is steep, but the rewards of flying down the other side and feeling the wind in your hair and on your face are well worth the trudgery of getting up that damned hill...



    ☼Becky☼

  • Yep...almost there Love, C


  • Lucy. gold member
    July 3

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    'free'

    love you lots

  • grm
    July 3
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  • gin?
    in your own time hunny
    love ya xxxx


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 3

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    "free"...and a new beginning. when one door closes, another opens..wide.

    love you girl



    ~ Nicolette

  • love you


  • jantastic gold member
    July 3
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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    July 3
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    boy i like this, and you Gillian


    al


  • smee5
    July 3
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    I love you lady!
  • me too


    ooooo i love "Book of Days" luv yah sis.



  • I'm proud of you.

    • thank you my dearest girl... im pretty proud of me too.. its been a long day, but im happy and calm
  • ... *cheers luv*

    • aggghh the prophet returns... tell me something good.. hiya H.. nice to see you around
      • not sure if it me that returned or not ... maybe it's just the words leaking from a year's absence ... although i still luv ya

  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    July 3
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