Hope burns up in the pits of hell,
smoldering ashes bubble and swell.
Underlings battle for highest acclaim,
in a blaze of torture and satanic games.
Darkness clings to shackled wrists.
blood cascades in Medusa mists.
Screams pour from twisted lungs,
tears encase the serpents tongue.
Hysteria peels smiles away,
eyes tremble with falling decay.
Gurgling moans emit rancid bile,
souls captured, absorbed by guile
The living dead upon his throne,
made from flesh, fused with bone.
His piercing eyes alive with sin
that bleeds through carbon skin.
Stone heart embraces desire,
withering spirits take him higher.
So do not sell your soul for gain,
or you'll be next on the torture train.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow.. exceptional poem... flows with an eerie foreboding rhythm and you always nail the rhyme so effortlessly...
great pic too
Bravo
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This was really very well done, exceptional rhyme and flow as well
and actually, you have very aptly described most presidential campaigns here in America.
and no, I am not kidding
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Gee whiz!
Gee Whiz this is a very powerful poem this sure hits right in there deep withing the deepest soul region of ones being!
Very provocative on though and pondering and deliciously dark and yet bewitching and enchanting to read, and so well penned to poetic perfection as with stunning graphics, flow and rhyme, which is just sensational and a definate piece of poetic mastery and sculpting. Fine and outstanding work, no wonder you have so many awardsa and trophies, you are also so very inspiring too.
Excellently and phenomenally well done, love it, fabulous read all the way through. You are extrmely talented.
Hope you are in print? If not you sure should be! Congratulations on this!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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"Hysteria peels smiles away,
eyes tremble with falling decay.
Gurgling moans emit rancid bile,
souls captured, absorbed by guile"
i love the visual of this very eerie and awesome deffinatly would be pretty cool to see -
Wow! This gave me shivers! A very chilling message you have put with in this write! You have really went beyond with this. Best of luck in your contest, and thank you for commenting on one of my writes as well.
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ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC!
The imagery you invoked from your cauldron of darkness
leaves a scar upon my mind.The penmanship exquisite...the morbidity devine...
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Wow... While I'm not overly-fond of rhyming poetry, yours was done with a deadly decadence that really was something spectacular, and that picture was done a great justice today... 3st0p would be very proud. Well done, and good luck.
Laura
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OMG! this is seriously
scary
and written in the
usual perfection.
Great flow!
Awesome rhyme!
Simply stunning!
Good luck!
~Pastel
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all i can say is DAMN!!!!!!!, this was something i mean that i love the art you picked and the poems just amazing, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Awesome!
Great picture! And your wording is outstanding!! this was excellent!!!
best wishes in your contest.
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this is a lovely write,
i really do love love this, such powerful imagery,
and wonderful rhymes,
all my love, keep penning,
love you grandma,
kitty xxx -
Dark, scary and painful. And what a powerful picture you have posted with it! Good luck in the contest.
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Ahhhh! the wonderful pain
the pounding pain that is giving me this sweet headache. The torture of it all, I have read another demented piece from the Dark One. She rocks the dark. Have a great day, Dementia.
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this is a brillant poem full of dark emotions and scary images just wonderful fantastic rhyme to
Darkness clings to shackled wrists.
blood cascades in Medusa mists.
Screams pour from twisted lungs,
tears encase the serpents tongue.Hysteria peels smilesHis piercing eyes alive with sin
that bleeds through carbon skin.
Stone heart embraces desire,
withering spirits take him higher.
So do not sell your soul for gain,
or you'll be next on the torture train. away,
eyes tremble with falling decay.good luck in the contest
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Great tale...
Awesome entry. This looks like a very interesting contest pic.
Well done!
wolf
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