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Seedlings (#18)

Seedlings sleep beneath potential's surface,

they germinate from water's flowing out of mouths,

drenching in golden nutrients,

nurturing the essence,

or if the fertilizer by toxins

stagnating what might have bloomed.

 

Eyes fondling the future

gaze at seeds with flower visions,

carefully and thoughtfully cultivating

what the senses say awaits to be awaken.

 

The face the eventually is revealed

for each gem that is planted

is never forged and fixed

when love's husbandry culls

its depth of what can truly shine.

 

How often life's petals,

viewed as strangling vines,

transform into a gift of beauty

if lips have more water than fire.

 

Hearts always sprout

from the soil where they are sewn,

finding their way to sunlight

with petals full of grace and wonder.

 

Unless they were drowned in waste

poured out from a mental outhouse,

which only brings into being

the foliage of negativity

so often mirroring the fingers of caustic desires

who tended to the growth.

Author notes

18."A weed is no more than a flower in disguise." -James Russell Lowell

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  • excellent~

    You have given a seedlings a wonderful new gift of life from such a talented pen as yours...
    It is true they do sleep beneath the surface awaiting new growth from the rain and the sun....and tended with love and care....from ugly tiny seedlings to petals full of beautiful wonder and grace..tended by ones hand that love and grows flowers
    And look to the sun with love and tenderness and care...
    Perfect...
    Best of luck in the contest...
    Hugs
    Your lil sis
    Susan~~~


  • maralisa silver member
    July 3

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    a wonderful take on the growth of a seedlings life beautiful we all nuture things that need to grow
    nurturing the essence,or if the fertilizer by toxinswith petals full of grace and wonder.Unless they were drowned in waste poured out from a mental outhouse,which only brings into being the foliage of negativity so often mirroring the fingers of caustic desires
    who tended to the growth.stagnating what might have bloomed.How often life'spetals,viewed as strangling vines,good luck in the contest