Embers of spite's
spoken words,
slowly burn,
upon wrong-doings tongue...
A taunted spirit,
has rekindled,
with a voice of flames....
~Tears breathe within ashes wounds...~
A contest entry
- Quickie...8/25....Prompt is UP!!!! by Sweet Sorrow.
425 points, ended July 3, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - To the following poets only..... by Sweet Sorrow.
400 points, ended July 14, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OH, I like this one. Succinct, precise and so very expressive. While there is so much left unsaid, the words indicate how much more could be said. Very nice work.
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A very well penned piece to go along with the prompt. Quite powerful!!!!
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Tears breathe within ashes wounds...~very powerful line made the whole piece dark yet poignant. Good take on the prompt.
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Lyrical and poignant... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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