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Creeping Death

A soul of

skin and bone

no longer walks,
Its spirit blind,

within the spirals of life.

 

 

A faceless shadow 

trapped within

silence,

bleeds the tears,

of past walked ground,

Alone and stripped raw, 

 only mute screams remain

 

 

 ~The footprints of eternal pain,

 have engraved opened scars...

 

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    July 8, 2008

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    Very powerful indeed...

    I love this, you really showed great use of the given prompt. Thanks for entering.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • PerfectImperfection
    July 7, 2008

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    A truly powerful ending here. A well spoken piece of darkness indeed. Sullen and poignant. Nicely done!