Anger’s nova…
incendiary words
cascade across my tongue.
Molten emotions pour
volcanically…
I see your pain
and it
chars my soul…
we are both damaged.
Author notes
This begs the question: Who is hurt more by your anger? I fear, it may be ourselves....
Prompt: Vengeance is ashes in my mouth ~ Amai Kanashimi
Picture Credit: http://sfwatts.deviantart.com/art/Vengence-51593803
25 words EXACTLY
A contest entry
- Quickie...8/25....Prompt is UP!!!! by Sweet Sorrow.
425 points, ended July 3, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - To the following poets only..... by Sweet Sorrow.
400 points, ended July 14, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Congrats on the Gold.. and yes it does come back
to us more that what we dish out in our anger...
Riftkin
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Bravo!!! I really love this!!! you always do such a wonderful job.. The flow and emotion in this was really intense!!! best of luck!!
Angel
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Simple and compact yet the hidden meaning shows in every words.
Angers nova...this words alone speakes a lot.
Molten emotions pour
volcanically… vivid emotions here. Well done!
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Wonderfully descriptive! Great ending too. Well done.
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I read a lot of poems about anger here on AP but I think this is the best of the bunch so far, it is simple and clear.
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Magnificent!!
Excellent take on the prompt my Friend and Wonderful weaving of words~
Love cascade across my tongue~
Woooo Hooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
Such a great take on the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Great writing
The very first line is just brilliant; anger's nova! I love the imagery in this one and that picture is amazing; adds to the effect.
Good luck!
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