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Echoes



Lust filled lips
  pleasures gate
Drinking your sweetness,
you cry my name.
Passion’s liquid echoes fade.



Author notes

DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!
Picture Credit: Orgasm_by_sylviaD (www.deviantart.com)
16 Words

A contest entry

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  • Tattboyspet
    July 7, 2008

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    lol ... rather PG rated
    short and to the point without being vulgar - well done!
    congrats on the bronze


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    yes yes this was truly loaded i enjoyed this totally becuase i am a freak you really ipressed me


  • MagicLady silver member
    July 5, 2008

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    Wow, in only 16 words and one of then is yours? HA HA

    Cheryl


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 3, 2008
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    • KayJay
      July 3, 2008
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      That bad huh? Not even a grin... Oh well *sigh*

  • vacygnet
    July 3, 2008
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    not bad

    smiles


  • Lucy.
    July 3, 2008
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  • Angelflower
    July 3, 2008

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    Eek!!! sensual and hot all at the same time!! you did wonderfully!!! like you always do bravo hun! I really love it!! best of luck!!


    Angel

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