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I See

I see a golden sunset
My eyes behold it's wonder
In the sunset of my life
I'd like to be this my thunder

I see the varied colors
The sun reflects upon the sea
Also against the evening sky
As it spreads it's rays so free

I feel the warmth that comes from this
It's rays are a part of me
I like to spread sunshine everywhere
Like the sun spreads sunshine in me

As the sun sets in the west
And the shadows seem to fade
I know I'll see the sun again
For by God's hand it was made


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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    your sentiments aare very beautiful and images are binging the life into it...well done..and my thanks for the wonderful entry in my contest....

  • PianoMan
    July 3, 2008
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    Nice poem. I mentioned this in one of my other comments, but I just love beingable to watch the sunset in the evening. Since I can't do it very often, it makes it even more special. Good luck in the contest!

    I see agolden sunset
    My eyes behold its beauty...
    For By God's hand it was made.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    UPLIFTING,

    VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN,

    A JOY TO READ.

    GOD BLESS...