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Youthful Shame.

A broken heart,
An empty page,
That longs for beauty,
Brought with age.

A childish face-
Despising youth,
A heart which strives,
To mask the truth.

A mind which dreams,
And fails to live-
For fear that life
itself, won’t give.

A hidden face,
Amongst a crowd;
No doubt afraid,
To speak too loud.

A laugh which starts,
But wanes to gray.
A smile which breaks,
and fades away.

A voice which talks,
But longs to sing
For love-
That only age can bring.

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Option 4 - Hiding Yourself from Others

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  • DesolatELifE
    July 7, 2008
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    Absolutely beautiful poem. Perfect flow, and so on =]


  • Dancing Feather gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    Great poem. I really liked this one...I think that everyone can relate to this in their own way. Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest

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