Always a part of me yet you're lost,
it breaks my heart to think of the cost.
Words of anger as you walked away,
I'm left sitting here counting the cost.
Each day is empty without you near,
I think about the enormous cost.
I pray each night that you'll come back home,
I'm lonely as I think of the cost.
'Twas my fault that caused your heart to bleed,
now I'm left here with the final cost.
Know that you're in my heart forever,
wonderland is dead and pride has cost.
Author notes
Form - Ghazal (First attempt!)
In a list
A contest entry
- Time for some Ghazal Ya Ahbabi~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ by Amarige.
600 points, ended July 11, 12 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very lovely for the first attempt in the Ghazal form..Thank you for joining my contest and best of luck
Ruby
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