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Nothing Between Us But Us

Nothing between us but us meaning that no one should be knowing what we do but the only ones that should know is us what's this all about? That people should know everything about what we do in the room do you agree with me? Do you need everyone knowing on what you do?
 On what we have should be secretly touched by us nobody but us you can't anything that will change my mind but me
I don't want nothing coming between us but us
  and their is nothing between me but you,
You would be the one who I would be thinking about because your a sweetest man I ever met and not think about himself that is a great man I ever seen.
 Nothing between us but us
  So you don't need to cry me a river because that's when you should be happy and not should be crying it's like you are an angel and you are that's why I would tell that angel because I love that angel.
I love that man in the world.
He means to this world and he means everything to talents.
He also means to me
Nothing between us but us so stop, please stop crying me a river because I already have a river between us the only thing I don't have you in my life
and that's what I need in my life I don't need jewelery, video's, or anything else all I need for a gift is you
so please don't fly away because their is nothing good but you so if you fly away could you take me with you?
Nothing like that at all just nothing between us but us so could we run together if you don't want to run that's okay but nothing between us but us  so would that be a deal? Because that's real.
Not real as a bird but real as words coming from someone's mouth but nothing is coming between.
That is between 2 people or even 4,5, or 6 but why so many between us?
Nothing between us but us you could cherish  you could scream but no but us.

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Written January 4th, 2004

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  • Rotem06
    November 11, 2004
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    damn!. i hate this poem that I wrote here long time ago.. o well.. see-ya soon..

  • Candyfloss
    January 6, 2004
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    oh dear the hypocracy

  • Candyfloss
    January 6, 2004
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    thanx for ur incredibly constructive criticism on my poem....