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A Love So Deep

Love that cuts the
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  • Swtpoetryman
    July 6

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    SHORT & NOT SO SWEET - UNLIKE YOU, SUGAR!

    These 7 words are packe with a punch to be sure - and are filled to the brim with sadness, emotion, and truth - that me - for one wishes weren't quite so true - for PEACE & LOVE is all that I wish you and so I will say it again until it comes true - forever!
    Peace & Love, Sugar!
    Earl.


    • onesugar silver member
      July 7
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      Earl you're a sweetie

      Thank you for your kind words. I'm sure one day I will know peace and love again. Until then I will let your words of peace and love fill my heart.
      Love you ~sugar~ xxx

  • Lily otv
    July 4

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    Sometimes the shortest writes with the least frills manage to concentrate power and depth of feeling into so few words that they cannot be passed by without giving them a lot of thought. This poem is one of them as it is based in reality and truth.


    • onesugar silver member
      July 6
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      Thank you for reading
      Always valued and appreciated
      ~Sugar~

  • Ephiphany silver member
    July 3

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    What tha?

    is this my sissy...being


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    This is the most Powerful piece I've seen in a very long time.

    Hit a homerun with this one Cookie
    Loved it

    -ephiphany


    • onesugar silver member
      July 4
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      Sissy what can I say - I had my thinking head on yesterday.

      Thanks for your fab comment truly appreciated

      ~sugarcookie~

  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 3

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    Oh yes its so true it does..
    Words are true and honest and love the way you lay this out too
    Julie


  • Amazira
    July 3
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    yep!

    Gotta agree with this!


    • onesugar silver member
      July 3
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      Yep! Would have sufficed this time. I know you are in agreement.
      Appreciate you reading and commenting
      Love ~sweetness~ xxx

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 3

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    It does too. It does hurt very very much. And you feel helpless against it. Your creativity here is wonderful. Well done Sugar. Emotions run through this.

    Dark
    Wishes
    Wayne Leon
    x


    • onesugar silver member
      July 3
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      Thanks hon
      Appreciated as always. I have had my thinking head on today...my new name Worzel Gummage
      Love ~sugar~ xx
  • midnightblue1272
    July 3
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    Amen.

    So true, sis. Short & to the point. Superb!


    • onesugar silver member
      July 3
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      Thanks bro
      Always appreciate and value you reading and commenting...I think you know what I mean.
      ~sugar~
  • twodie4
    July 3

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    Hi hon. When you love someone so much and it's a truly deep love, it can and often does feel like a physical pain. This is very thought provoking.
    Em


    • onesugar silver member
      July 3
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      Thanks Emma
      Appreciate you and your comment. Your words are so true.
      ~sugar~
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