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Alone

Another morning-
same day.

 

Waiting for you to come home


but

 

you

 

don't...

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Prompt - "Three days dead" - 13 Words

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 19
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    Excellent poem


  • Masterful from beginning to end

  • This is really sad love.
    I read it and I know how it feels, but it's hard because it just reminds me of the way things were. Once upon a time



  • maralisa gold member
    July 3
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    wow thisso deep and has a very powerful impact on the emotions fantastic

  • short and deep. Absolutely wonderful.

  • i really love the feelings you have used in this poem, i love the depth of these 13 words, good luck in the contest, and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy

  • sad
    but realy well done
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