The first time ever I saw your face,
I thought that my world rose in your eyes,
You noticed me without me screaming at you to see me,
I fell in love with your poetry,
And you too,
Your beauty surrounds me,
Your words astound me,
But I would never ask of you,
Anything like what I want to,
So I write instead,
This letter,
You show me paradise,
I'm afraid to take,
just in case it goes away,
But still an eternity I wait,
For you to read this,
And to judge me,
Maybe you will,
Maybe you won't,
But either way it won't change how I feel,
Mi Amore, my love,
I hope you will notice this in me,
I would wait forever to spend one night with you,
I'd live with the sorrow of not having you,
if I could have one kiss, one embrace,
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Author notes
For my baby girl Sammi xx Love you baby girl xx
This would be a love letter to leave on your pillow xx
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- Your love for me by CharcoalScreams.
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Comments
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Hm.. I think you're going to have to win ;-) I've always drempt of getting out of the shower or coming home to work to find a letter or poem awaiting me on my pillow =] I love you!! xox
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Thanks for entering. Good luck xx
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