She is shattered,
Has taken shelter is a corner.
No way is found
How to come out
What she has gone through!
How many like her
In this unhealthy world
Are abused, day and night?
Mankind progresses,
But their hearts remain
In the dustbin of hell!!
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Author notes
Credit photo: in the corner, by justsappho
http://justsappho.deviantart.com/art/in-the-corner-90504671
A contest entry
- ABUSE - looking for poems to be published :) by DramaQueen469.
550 points, ended October 25, 2008, 58 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The last line is so powerful. The whole poem has a beautiful flow; overall I'm very impressed - WELL DONE and thankyou for entering.
~*~DramaQueen469~*~ -
You did a great job at this poem, I love how you took the experience and emotions of one girl and related it to the whole. How many are abused day and night? The answer is not something that I would like to know. Thanks for entering and good luck :]
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I like the way you drew this from an individual situation into a societal piece, without ever losing the tragic singularity of the one life destroyed...Well done. And then I looked at the photo inspiration. VERY well done! Peace always, Rhonda
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Thank you for this strong and stirring entry. It was a pleasure to read and you did a really nice job expressing the picture through writing. Good work!
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