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Bright light

Behind transparent garments,
blue eye of stormy eternity
evokes a ravenblack moment
of peacefully contemporation.
Bright light, translated into
dreamy images, safety, my mind
a gentle chair to lay on.

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  • Sensual Angel gold member
    July 3

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    WOW!!! for someone who just woke up damn... this is an excellent take on the prompt... I wish I could write like this when I first wake up..

    excellent job with the poem

    good luck

    kat