Glad you could make it today
it appears there are needs,
burning desires to convey.
Lay back on the couch
relax and breathe deep,
then I can start right away.
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1050 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh.. this is really good.. The imagery and humor here was great.. Lol.. I love the flow of this as well.. You did a great job.. Congrats on the Bronze..
Angel
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thats brilliant
it's great the way you came up with that from the picture,it really fits, and is absolutely bueatifull.
good luck, thats a wonderful poem
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this was the worth the wait..
I really really loved this poem that you wrote.. your take on the prompt is different, and I love different.. out of the box thinking
what exactly is it that you want to start right away with?? I could give you some ideas...
excellent job..
good luck
kat
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