Swirling twirling in the air
You always fly back
Way back where
I sit and ponder on this spot.
Awaiting whispered, secrets dear
So i can feel with out despair.
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1050 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i really love the way you have worded this poem and the wonderful take on the prompt picture, congrats on your HM and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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'sitting and pondering'--what the picture seems to be about...Congrats on the HM!
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excellent take on the prompt.. I love your poem a lot..
if I may suggest there are some typos.
last line the i should capitalized, and dispair = despair.
I really enjoyed reading this..
good luck
kat
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lol
sorry about that i was so engrossed in getting the right number of words in the last line, that i forgot to check my grammer lol.
thanks for the lovely comment means a lot.
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