Abiding time,
patience dwindles,
as ravens flock around me,
soul whirlpools
like my thoughts,
love
not returned,
miles have been covered,
yet last few minutes
are churning me inside out.
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1050 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thats lovely.
good luck hun,
i would like to say something constructive, but i think you have simply had the same problem i had with my simply trying to say all you want about this amazing promp in the word limit.
but really well done and best of luck
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ooohhh I really love this poem that you have written.. I particularly love the last stanza.. excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
p.s. I love your bg.
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Thank you..I just made that background and had to use it!
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