Tears fly like
broken hearts..
Whispering,
loves denial..
Seventh
wonder of the world..
Salvation on
Wings of the bitter..
Soul slowly lies within,
softly dreaming of
days in your embrace..
Author notes
10 Poets
30 Words
Picture found on Photo bucket
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Quickie by AngelWithDarkWings.
1050 points, ended July 3, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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congrats on the trophie,
you deserve it this is a lovely poem,
i love the imagery in it,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
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thanks 
glad you liked it!
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a beautiful poem full of strong emotions and vivid images especialy the following line it is so thought provoking Salvation on Wings of the bitter..
Soul slowly lies within, congratulations on your well deserved shiny
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Oh very nice... love the "salvation on wings of the bitter"... wonderful image... From the shiny, it appears I'm not alone in my admiration...
Ken
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Thank you very much! I'm glad that you liked it..
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beautuful!
amazeing!
stunning!
and thats just you
this is a great poem darling
very well written
congrats on silver
you should have got gold
{not me } -
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Haha.. whatever you.. you did a wonderful job so lol.. I'm glad that you liked it though..
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this is beautiful, I love it so much.. beautiful yet sad also.. dreams are good.. they bring us closer to the ones that we care deeply for.. the emotions from this poem just jumped right off the page at me..
excellent take on the prompt..
good luck
kat
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