Tastebuds flower on flavor;
succulent fruit
sweet as the rose
and the thorn.
Parted petals,
poised like knives-
lithe blades
sharpening sensations.
They brush wildfire
and scorch desire
as bodies dance
a tangled conflagration.
Warmth,
dribbling down
from lips to skin;
the blood
that your teeth drew.
In a list
A contest entry
- LOVE AND LUST by MissMarie.
300 points, ended July 20, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetic Seduction. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended July 11, 19 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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forget spanking
this is more like it...
biting
yum me likes 
awesome imagery portraying this, kudos
Tasha
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Oh wow, this was just excellent. I liked the name of it and you do nicely with the imagery for the reader. I liked this very much. Keep up the great writes.
~~Tori~~
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They brush wildfire
and scorch desire
as bodies dance
a tangled conflagration.
this was really good, along with your imagery and metaphor. Good job
and thanks for your comment on Conquest of Paradies.
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wow! I love it the imagery and everything very sexy very seductive good luck in my contest kudos!
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*sigh*...how wonderfully beautiful...soft sensual in beautiful metaphor...this is something to remember for it lovely tone, yet deep heat...excellent as always!
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Had to take a deep breath just now... realized I had held my breath throughout reading this deeply sensual poem you have written.
Sweetly said and most surely says it in a way that the reader sighs and wishes...
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wow hot pic lmao!
and a really sensual write too.. loved it!
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This is quite gorgeous. The imagery is absolutely stunning, and seemed to carve the images right into my brain.
The alliteration is also very full and wonderful.
Tangled conflageration
I love that idea.
Wonderful job! <3
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hmm. I don't really know what to say. I love the first line... 'flower'... You know how much I love nature imagery.
The last line creeped me out a bit, but I guess it was in a good way? How do you manage to do that, Marty?
thankies you for sharing.
~Cassie
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Wow. You used incredible imagery on this. Excellent, and best of luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
. Rewarded 4
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this is such a powerful and amazing write. I love the detail and the beautiful flo and softness of it. an amazing write well done
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I really enjoyed reading this poem
of yours here. Very beautifully
written. Well done and all the best
to you with it in this contest!
Thanks so much for sharing it with
us all here!
Jeremy0826 -
Whoa fire down below This is hot but so good nice
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Hmmmmmmmmmm Yes this is one hot little read, there is nothing like a little pain with the pleasure. I love to bite and this sent me flyin. Well done and good luck.
. Rewarded 4
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. I too like the picture....mmmmm very nice. Good Luck.
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Thank you for your beautifully penned entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Beautifully wrote, very expressive. Love the subtle sensuality to this, it makes me want to sigh into my pillow and think about the one I adore! Love the picture as well
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This surely has passion and emotions and I love that. The choice of words is beautiful and you did a wonderful work with this poem.
. Rewarded 4
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perfect
such a beautiful picture on my mind.
thank you -
wow, that was great. i could feel it.
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Amazing;;
very passionate, emotional piece! great job! -
Great job. The imagery is very sharp. It is a very passionate, smoldering write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Great wording that gives some good images and emotion.
Very well done!
best wishes in your contest.
. Rewarded 4
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A sharply focused piece that has balance and point.
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This is a beautifully written piece with fantastic use of language.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
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Very beautiful powerful poem
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Very Good
yep Hot lovers it says to me, a delicate though intense moment, well done
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I love this one!
This is a really great write. I especially like the lines, "sweet as the rose
and the thorn." You represent the sharp and sweet end of love perfectly in this poem. Great Job! -
Very passionate with a touch of the dark! Absolutely delicious... wonderful write!
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You have been nominated! This is indeed a gorgeous write, and I hope you get great response from the rest of the group!
PI
. Rewarded 4
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OOOoh!!! Wow - that does have a great bite to it! Such a very well composed piece of passion ignited. I adore the references to fire, that in itself is quite intriguing. Great imagery flowing along a brilliant (and quite unique) approach of love's bounty. Excellent write!
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I love the use of metaphores here! Very poetic and enticing! Good luck in the contest!
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omg.....!!!!!!!!!!!!! ah! where have you been!!! I've missed your exquisite writing!!!!!!!
"Parted petals,
poised like knives-
lithe blades
sharpening sensations.">>>>holy hot salsa!!!
LOVE THis 
sharping sensations">> love that phrase, set me in a twitter
conflagration...I drool over your diction choices... (not literally of course, that's unladylike ...not to mention uncouth )
"Dribbling>>>good lord what an image!!
great, super great, what an awesome poem to blast back onto AP
~you better be on more so we can chat
Sailor Ptolema
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it was SO SO SO SO deserved !!!
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So this is why I never see you online! [even if I'm not on much myself]
*murders the guy*
"Parted petals,
poised like knives-"
I think I almost wish I wrote that.
♥x.
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I'm never online...so you can never see me *Grins* But I'm glad you like
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