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oh brynhilt, i killed him for you.

i want to dance with you~
              dance with you~
i want to dance with you~
              dance with you~





      do you love me back?
          as oft maidens will.

i will trace your place in my heart
  with EX's and OH's.

                    i shall call your name in battle--
                      oh, how enemies [crumble]!

            and i caught fire for the last time,
                  as i fell for your sweet lies.





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like the way i melted

          [when romeo kissed juliet.]

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i want to dance with you~
              dance with you~
i want to dance with you~
              dance with you~





      should ragnarök decide
          to steal you tonight~

i will not even move, for i tremble
  to kiss you goodbye.

                    the potion has made me
                      terribly weak.

            and my heart cannot bear
                  that you must leave.





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goodbye, my love, my valkyrie.

          [my armor of battle.]

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                                  here is my promise to "forever,"
                                  and here is my sacrifice
                                  to meet you in niflheim.





[it is a shame that you have forgotten me.]

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no one will ever understand what this means.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    November 15, 2008

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    The dance is continud through the words you have used here..they are rythmetic with the heart beats and made this poetry very beautiful one..well done...


  • the.art.of.drowning
    July 4, 2008

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    your right. it is very hard to understand. a bit of mystery never hurt anyone. but i think it is a beautiful poem. good work!