i want to dance with you~
dance with you~
i want to dance with you~
dance with you~
do you love me back?
as oft maidens will.
i will trace your place in my heart
with EX's and OH's.
i shall call your name in battle--
oh, how enemies [crumble]!
and i caught fire for the last time,
as i fell for your sweet lies.
///
like the way i melted
[when romeo kissed juliet.]
///
i want to dance with you~
dance with you~
i want to dance with you~
dance with you~
should ragnarök decide
to steal you tonight~
i will not even move, for i tremble
to kiss you goodbye.
the potion has made me
terribly weak.
and my heart cannot bear
that you must leave.
///
goodbye, my love, my valkyrie.
[my armor of battle.]
///
here is my promise to "forever,"
and here is my sacrifice
to meet you in niflheim.
[it is a shame that you have forgotten me.]
Author notes
no one will ever understand what this means.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The dance is continud through the words you have used here..they are rythmetic with the heart beats and made this poetry very beautiful one..well done...
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your right. it is very hard to understand. a bit of mystery never hurt anyone. but i think it is a beautiful poem. good work!




