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Weaving Words of Love

With but a feather's touch;
a silken caress upon your lips
of sparks filled with destiny
flaming from these fingertips.



A simple look into your eyes
to speak more than words can say;
only truth can echo the feeling
of what my heart cannot betray.


A whispered breath of deepest passion
lingering against your cheek;
searching for all the answers
your soul could ever seek.


A tender kiss so velvet soft,
and rich with love divine;
I'll weave the words around your heart
that forever makes you mine.

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  • Beautiful Sis!

    You are so awesome!

    Much love, brother Timothy

  • Delmar610 gold member
    July 7
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    wow! these are words from a beautiful heart! I love this poem. just wow!
  • Billy Rob
    July 6

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    Excellent

    My goodness, what a beautiful and moving write you've penned here. Such deep emotions and a love so deep. You are right about one's eyes. When they are in love, they say it more convincingly than words ever could. An excellent piece. Very well done, indeed. Billy Rob


  • Rovingone gold member
    July 3

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    Ah, just delicious! What a poem! It just makes your heart race. I love the sensual way it unwinds and soft rhyme through out. You write a truly melodic love poem!

  • Beautiful

    Hello Dear Poet,
    You have woven a beautiful write.So much emotion shows through your written words.The reader can feel these emotions as they read along.You also have painted a beautiful picture of love and devotion.Your back ground is also very beautiful.You have been a pleasure to read.I send to you many beautiful blessings of love and happiness.Take care!
    Your friendly angel in poetry,
    ~Angel-Anne~

  • This is Beautiful!

  • This is simply beautiful, what else is there to say. Nice choice of background you have here too. I love all the stanzas and the flow. not enough points so
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