can i ask you a question?
can i ask you for this?
if i gave you my heart,
would you give me a kiss?
the times we did,
took my breath away
the times you tried to leave,
are the times i begged you to stay
this is what i say
the way you move, makes my heart jump
the way you talk makes my heart thump
simple pleasures are all i ask
but if your here to break my heart, i think i will just pass,
the curve in your smile, is not one to just look at leave for a while
but a smile that should be noticed.
because on the darkest night,
your smile is still the light that guides me home.
i wish i could tell you how i feel,
that i love you more than you will ever know,
more than i could ever show
but too bad you're taken,
but if you werent,
i would steal you for myself
but somehow,
i dont think i love you,
is enough to explain how i feel,
all i ask,
is one more chance,
for that last dance
to make you mine,
just give me the sign
[It's the rythem of two hearts beating pounding out a message steady and true talk to me baby tell me what you're feeling I know what love is what's it to you]
Author notes
[It's the rythem of two hearts beating pounding out a message steady and true talk to me baby tell me what you're feeling I know what love is what's it to you]
i wasnt sure what type of poem(that isnt actually what i mean, but i cant describe what i need to say)
A contest entry
- very simple capture me by Nikki Rowles.
1100 points, ended July 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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it's okay.. i think it got a bit slower towards the end tempo wise. otherwise its brilliant ... the beginning is stronger though


