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Rainbows in Your Eyes


i think,

there used to be a boy
who chased rainbows

his hope almost giving form to the light



he used to lie in circles of grass
and imagine the faeries dancing merrily around



[i've since forgotten him
and i must confess myself


disappointed


that this is so
because he would have kept reaching
for the rainbows in your eyes...]


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I don't know what this is supposed to say.

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  • Pruellen
    August 2

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    Well there is a lot of ways to interpret this poem. I really like how you wrote it too, the spacing between the lines. I think this poem is AWESOME!!!


  • Asa.Rose.
    July 7

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    Dude. This is such a great poem. There are lots of ways to interpret it I guess, and I can see how you have no idea xD But I really like this, just like the rest of your poetry...it's...perfect. The last line really opens up new dimensions to be explored for the meaning...this is just awesome, man.


  • Midniterose
    July 3

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    To forget how one used to be innocent is so common in people these days. They lose that wonder that children see the world with and they forget the way they didn't judge, didn't worry, hardly cared. Their hearts were pure and soundless, like the sunshine on dewdrops. I love your poem. This is a wonderful write like the rest of your poetry. Thank-you for sharing your talent for poetic composition.


  • subah
    July 3

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    why would it be disappointing to keep reaching for the rainbow...i dont find it so, unless ofcourse i'm getting the poem totally otherwise..