Do you have a boyfriend/girlfriend?
How do you prove your love?
Can you help me?
I love my boyfriend but those words dont even begin to show how much.
I want to show him, prove to him.
How do I do that?
Be faithful? Well duh!! Already done.
Call and talk everyday? We do that already and I love it!!!
Tell him how much he means? He knows he means the world to me.
What about writing a song? Dude I cant write songs, next option please.
What about just saying it? My words get jumbled and I get nervous.
What about a poem? That might work.
What do I say in a poem:
I love you, you mean the world to me. I will love you always. You are the first thing on my mind when I wake up and the last thing when I go to bed. I don't go 10 minutes without thinking about you. I wish I could spend all my time in your arms. You have my heart and it's all yours.
Could I actually write a whole poem about how much I love him?
We will wait and see.
Author notes
Well i was thinking about how i could tell my boyfriend how much i love him and this is what i came up with. If it ended quickly it's cause i really gotta pee so yeah anyways i love you and you know who you are (rob just incase you forgot how much i love you :]... Love you babe)
In a list
A contest entry
- Big points...just write what you want by Canis Lupus.
4500 points, ended July 30, 91 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell someone you love them... by Margaret Denham.
1900 points, ended August 23, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do u think, how can i improve ooo and my spelling sucks so if u see somthing to change let me know
Comments
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it was totally alsome poe
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hmmm ive always thought to really prove to someone you love them you both just have to feel it you can say it all you want and write about it but in the end the only thing that will prove it is if you "feel" it hmmm but this is really nice and thoughtfilled i cant really say much about prose since i dont really write it...but on to your next poem =)
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I think you said everything that you wanted to and in such a natural, honest way.
Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.
Margaret
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nice.
lol, i like this a lot.
it sucks how the word love is over-used these days. i wish that all we had to say was "i love you" fer them to know how much we do love them, but it's just tooooo over-used.
great job.
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really honest, think you should just show him this
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thanks the comment below urs is his so he did see it
it made me happy lol thanks for the comment
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awwwwwwwww u already know u dont have 2 prove nuthing to me i love u and dont need u to prove u love me
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