My hearth does churn for thou.
And within this sacred temple
I hold thou memory close.
For it has been thou that has made
Me sore with unbounded Ecstasy.
My lips await thou response once more.
It has been thou tender kiss that’s left me
Off guard. I have been anointed with cupid’s
Wavering hand of a most powerful sap, one
Strong enough to make thy bold and me free.
For I lust thee.
I lust for thee most gravely, and it is nature that’s
Transformed me to such a state where dreams
Become reason and reality has been lost to the
Irregularities of deep oblivion. My decision is
Raw with the blood of youth and a daring knife.
I gaze towards the starry night and observe
The constellations conglomerate to form a
New Orion of my dolor, one that in its hand
Holds my beating chamber and in its belt my
Glare becomes lost with deep speculation
Of what is to come.
For thou are my secret silent love, the subject
Of my infatuation and obsession. An infatuation
That awaits the garish light of day with raving
Ecstasy, for with day comes thou formidable
Presence. I lust for thee forbiddenly,
a lust for what thou creates with titillating lips.
And my lips dwell with the remembrance of thou kiss.
My shoulders remember thou hold, my neck remembers
Thou lips, my mind recalls, my heart agitates, while
My eyes close hoping to relive the past. Yearning for
Thou to share my feelings, yearning for this lust.
Perhaps that kiss was an irregularity,
For it has not let me sleep soundly since.
Thou lips texture I still recall, for thou
Sweet odor is still impregnated on my hair.
My mind is not still… what has thou done to me?
… tantalizing lust.
Author notes
http://www.deviantart.com/print/980363/
A contest entry
- The Seven Deadly Sins Contest by Ethereal One.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ONE OR TWO OR THREE FOR THE LADIES(extended edition :) ) by tarcus.
555 points, ended July 10, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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dolor? =dolour(a deep sadness)
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actually I thought it too, until I saw the word in a movie or in a book can't remember, so I looked it up to see if it was right and I got this. dolor: a state of great sorrow or distress :
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Thank you very much!!
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wow! you did post this with a lot of thought, i like the 4 th stanza best, thank you for this entry,good luck
Lin
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Great Job!
I really liked the third,fourth, and fifth stanzas. I liked the whole poem but those three stanzas were very captivating. Lust is a cruel monster and you captured it very well.
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Thank you so much for your comment!! hehe yeah I know lust can be intoxicating and consuming, thank you very much!
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powerfully written
That must have been some kiss! You express your uncontrollable lust for this person, so well in your poem.
Your words provide some strong images and emotions for the reader.
Thank you for your entry, and good luck!
Ethereal One
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Thank you s much for your comment and your applause! I'm glad you liked it. And yes, it was a mighty kiss haha.
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