I have so much to be thankful for...
I don't know where to begin!
But first and foremost...
Thanks for giving me my Life.
I may not of lived it as I should
but
It's been a great one so far...
Your gift has its detours...
Pains and sufferings
But all these are lessons learned
That we might learn to laugh again!
Second...
I'm thankful for my family
Even though I only have one sister left!
Third...
I'm thankful for my three daughters
They mean so much to me
Especiallly now that I have a grandson!
Maybe I can be his father in a sorta way
For I never had a son!
Forth...
I'm thankful for my friends
They have made me change to a better man
And are like Angels...
Always near to offer help...
Fifth...
I'm thaanful for my health.
I nave no handicaps
but
Admire the courage of those who do...
Sixth...
I appreciate all your beauty...
and artistry of rivers, mnountains, streams
valleys. floweres, trees
and even deserts like where I live.
dragonheart1
Author notes
unfinished as there is so much to ve thankful for...I need think more on this...
A contest entry
- Remember "The Lord" by MoonsShadow.
525 points, ended July 7, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is a wonderful piece of poetry
if only we spent more time in his praise as to sit and llk at the bad,,thank you for sharing this and entering into my contest...
Linda
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This really is pretty appalling! A mixture of sentimentality, self-satisfaction, ignorance and bad grammar. What a pity Jesus didn't help you on on those. Maybe he was too busy ensuring poor people starved to death.
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shameful that E humpalot needs to harass poets to make himself look good
I apologize to Dragon heart 1 for this type of abuse from such a person
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wow this is just so beautiful we all learn lessons within life and are thankful for them but only if we know how to appriecaite what we have can we then share you have penned some beautiful appreication the following line were beautiful
But all these are lessons learned That we might learn to laugh again!Second...Im thankful for my family.Even though I only have one sister left!Third...Im thankful for my three daughters They mean so much to me Especiallly now that I have a grandson !Maybe I can be his father in a sorta way For I never had a son! good luck in the contest
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this looks like it is a wonderful poem in progress, keep it up ~Amy
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