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My Eternal Blossom

Icy shackles of discontent
weigh upon
my weathered form.

      yet     

Your everlasting beauty
-- radiance of youth --
forever warms my soul.


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Prompt is the pic: http://sylwiaa.deviantart.com/art/Just-Married-89661846

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 3
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    A very uplifting take on the prompt.. lovely!!


  • solo wisp gold member
    July 3

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    Kind of the opposite way I took it ... guess I'm in a glass half-empty mood. heh But, yeah, icy shackles ... love that description. Good luck in the contest!

    Steve