Mirrored Truth

This myriad of mirrored lake,
reveals the haunting truth now.
Age claims me, as you hide
behind facades of beauty.

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Quickie? 7/20/20 by kiwigirljacks. 600 points, ended July 3, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Sandygram
July 7, 2008

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Beautiful Words.
Hi Richard, What a wonderful take in this picture. If we only look at the outward beauty of a person we miss so much. It surely will fade with age but if there is true beauty within, it will glow through many many years. Beauty is only skin deep and its sad that is all some see. But I say true beauty is found within. What a pleasure to read this morning. Beautiful write!!! You take care.

Bless You,
Sandy

Congratulations On The Bronze
Luckintheshadows
July 6, 2008

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ooooh! I can't believe I missed this! what a beautifully sad write! superb!

Thanks for sharing this, and congrats on the bronze,

Luck.
- PureCountry
  July 6, 2008
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  Thank you
  for the comment, I appreciate the you taking time to read this one.
kiwigirljacks
July 3, 2008
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Ahh yes.. the haunting truth! Excellent write!
Solo Wisp
July 3, 2008
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This is masterfully said .. nice word usage and flow to this poem. Beautiful entry!

Steve