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Young Love

Between Heaven and Earth
where sin exists,
but sorrow is banished,
we were stuck,

in love,

heads floating between clouds.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    Lovely imagery in your poem, it made me float too! You pictured the state of young love - and not so young, too - with a fine elegance. Congratulations on the bronze trophy.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    How wonderfully sweet and so true of young love...nice imagery...well written...thank you for sharing!