Globules of ambushed terrors,
Enamored sadness of a gloomy night,
Gently trickling luminaries of irresistible disappointment,
And a fleeting vanishing hope
That encountered its death in lonely asphalt
Tlick, pluck, Tlick, pluck
A soft misconception of your arrival,
The various witnesses and an illuminated path
Of the brilliant lack of your presence,
While dripping humidity enraptures my essence
Mingling substances, bitter and neutral peacefulness,
The lonely journey down an angered check through
An arctic neck, laying its bitter seed down crimson lane.
Baptism, I am reborn in pain.
A white vanishing smoke evokes from my choking mouth,
To the frivolous indifferent air. It swells and puffs and grows,
Till its intricate form, inter-webs with the layered skin,
Of the opaque colorless air, which dares infiltrate my clasping lungs
Providing sweet, clutching life.
Dare not smile, each twitching muscle convulsions
To the rhythmic night air of the pitter-patter of liquid loneliness.
Dare I see, the falling tears? Each an everyone enters my pupil
To my flaring gaze of anarchist bitter comprehension.
May I sir?
As life takes me by the ankle on a grouching tarantella.
Beat, Stop, Beat, Stop, Beat, Breath, Stop, Beat!
Choke, the vapor does not leave these clinging breasts.
But adheres to the stoic lines of membrane thoughts,
As swift electric jolts rapid to my breaking neck,
And through nature’s calming substances, my shoulders unwind.
My heart aches,
Father,
Nobody,
Father,
NOBODY,
Father,
My heart aches on solace lane.
A contest entry
- Kill Me by LullabyxxDreamer.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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I know how it feels, when you feel so lonely that you all you can do is hope for relief, yet none comes. You have penned great bitterness and truth, dear poet... Good luck in the contest.
Laura x -
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wow!
what a great write, amazing job at showing pain, but wish you would have shown a little more bitterness towards the end when nobody came... great write though! good luck!



