As the sun softly sets and the evening appears
the hunger returns. Tonight somebody’s tears
will flow as they take their last shuddering breath.
They will look in my eyes and see only death.
It’s not fear I seek. It’s my need to survive
for it’s only by blood that I stay alive.
Legend say I’m a monster but that’s just not true.
Why within my heart, I’m no different from you.
I’m really not vicious, I’m actually nice.
But if I ask you to dinner you might think twice.
Depending on where we pick as a venue
it just might be you that ends up on the menu.
I’ve heard it said, as my fangs sink within,
I’m the kind of guy that gets under your skin.
When it comes to conversation, I have few peers.
That’s what comes from living for hundreds of years.
The hunger’s my mistress, one that’s demanding
and more than your blood, I just want understanding.
Okay... I lie
Author notes
Thought I'd try something a little different (LOL) Hope you enjoy it...
Prompt: Twilight brings out the devil in me
Picture Credit: http://blackdelphin.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-86693029
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- Prompt #7 by phantasyintrigue-x.
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It’s not fear I seek. It’s my need to survive for it’s only by blood that I stay alive.a great take on the promt good luck in the contest
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"That’s what comes from living for hundreds of years."
Makes me think of vampires.
"The hunger’s my mistress"
LoL, great use of the word 'mistress'.
As for understanding...well, some people never get that. :/
Thanks for entering. (:
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Oh, I do understand!
LOL, this is a great take on the prompt Ken. Very unique write, and I think you've achieved your goal with it. Well done!
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