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All That You Have Given Me

I look into your eyes and I see hope.
You show me all that life is meant to be:
You give me back my optimistic dreams
And help me see that I’ll one day be free.
I look into your eyes and I see peace.
You help me love myself, love my whole life:
You bring me such serenity that I
Can tell you’ve calmed forever all my strife.
I look into your eyes and I see joy.
I cannot help but smile when you are near:
I feel like I will never cry again!
With smiles I’ll take back every fallen tear.
  I look into your eyes and see a friend
  Who surely will stick by me to the end.

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  • Poetic Drug
    July 4, 2008
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    this is a really good poem and i can see the impact that this loved one has on you thanks for entering