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...Two...One...

Two pair of eyes stare

Two hearts beat

Two pair of lips seal

Two sets of hands lock

Two lives join

One Love grows


Author notes

Prompt:

"Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies."
--Aristotle

 

I really don't like the way I've used 'pair' twice but I can't think of another word to substitue. Any suggestions would be great:)

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    July 19, 2008
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    Cute write I like it.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 6, 2008

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    All that matters is that it comes down to one in the end. One love grows... how nice. A good take on the quote prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • KayJay
    July 3, 2008

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    Nicely done...best of luck in the contest...
    Ken
    (How about binary? )