Elegance bewitched by stiches,
confronting the feigned veil
of beauty.
Scalpel digs into her flesh,
parting it open for artificial
beauty to seethe.
Revenge slips from her eyes,
when desire takes her whole;
preffering to feel pain,
than feel none.
~♥~
Author notes
Tried my best!
XXVampireeyesXX
Image credit:
"Dance Macabre"
by: TheIvorytowers (deviantart.com)
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A contest entry
- Contest Dark Image Prompt 20 /20 {PIF} by PerfectImperfection.
525 points, ended July 7, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
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A great emotive take on the prompt here. Love that first line, sets it off just right. Nicely done! Thanks so much for the entry!
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You know I was actually going to attempt this one, but you already my deal...cause that was all that was going to come out! Lol. You have done a wonderful job with this one sis!
Scalpel digs into her flesh,
parting it open for artificial
beauty to seethe.
This stanza sounds kind of rare, but I love it all the same because I believe in it. Beauty can seep out even the darkest of holes. And I love you take on the pic, you found beauty, made a disturbing, lol, looking girl into a beautiful, pained woman. Once again sis, in awe!
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