I was lost inside of your heart,
the one that would never come apart.
But that was just one more lie,
I was so into you, needed to say goodbye.
I forgot about my love, stopped writing,
and we never seemed to stop fighting.
I thought you were everything I wanted,
but soon my soul became haunted.
We were so lost into each others worlds,
but I got out fast, started my new world.
I embarked on finding myself and soul,
started trying different roles.
I learned more and more everyday,
and my soul is adrift, and it floats away.
I have learned a lot from you,
and I'll never regret what we went through..
I was lost and now I am found,
finally have I found my own ground..
Author notes
banana splits
A contest entry
- Lost Yourself, Find Yourself by dreamersalwayslive.
735 points, ended July 30, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do what you like.. I am not your brain...
Comments
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Great write...
very realistic and relate-able...smartly done and
well written with out overwhelming us with emotion you
realitically portrayed the journey we walk through...
not over or around.
well done poetess....well done!
ears/Seattle
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It's good!
I like the poem. It's nice in structure, and I like the ryhme here. It was done very well! The only thing I would change is eachothers to each other's in line nine. Very good poem!
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