A union of purpose
making each other whole.
Supporting each other
not taking control.
“In sickness and health”
though no words are said.
Love resides in the heart
and not in the head.
Author notes
Prompt: "Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies."
--Aristotle
Pictured Credit: http://dismayedmermaid.deviantart.com/art/love-9522654
10 lines
A contest entry
- PIF Quote Inspired by StormGoddess.
400 points, ended July 6, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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How perfect... You just described my Marrage....
in this Poem... and we been married for 10 yrs now..
Great work.. Ken... JackReed3....
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How true, love resides in the heart and not in the head. Well said, and a good take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Very Good! Now if only the heart had eyes instead of our head under a hood, there might be less of "A Love Misunderstood".
Nice*happy*
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first thanks for the comment.
second i liked how you reminded us where love should come from. very good
good luck
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Truly beautiful..best of luck in the contest.
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Brilliant as always...miss you
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Wonderfully complete write for only 8 lines. A perfect take on the prompt. Well done!
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Are you proposing?
Excellent write on your prompt! You are so versatile. I do believe you could twist a noun into a verb! Love to read you as always,
Jennifer
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Very tender. It makes me go all 'gooshy' inside!! I also really like the rhyme scheme
Good luck in the contest.
~Jillybean128
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