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Simveristic (my own word)

Driving n' thinking, thinking n' driving.

A whale Cliche' of a tale
the time my buddy n' I
sat with his dad's canoe
atop a whale
a summer in Somes Sound.

Driving n' thinking, thinking n' driving.

Three deer I yell
"Stay out of the road"
through the fog I need
some pepper.

Little fireflie
in a neon flash
against my windshield.

Driving n' thinking, thinking n'driving.

Saw an ol'buddy
fifteen years of prison
um...wonder how
that went.

Noticed a new hairdew
not one I'd sport
gottah ask someone
who knows prison life.

Driving n' thinking, thinking n' driving

Driving n' thinking, thinking n' driving

Driving n' thinking, thinking n' driving.

It's the adventure,
                            It's the simple things....

Author notes

It's adventure in simple things. That is my drive.
What will I see? What will I accomplish around that next corner" Or over that next obstical.
"Simveristic" To me means "A simply fantastic version of me being alive"

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  • Poetic Drug
    July 4, 2008
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    quite the fantastic coining of words but it was kinda off the wall thanks for entering


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    simveristic huh?

    well this write was quite 'fanwonderistacular!' l.o.l.9just made that up! l.o.l. I LOVE YOUR 'ADVENTURE' stories! this one is no exception! good work my friend, and lots of luck in the contest!


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    July 3, 2008
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    You paint pictures in my mind when read of your adventures. Juls