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Tender Eyes

Tender eyes
Pure and soft
Dazzle the day
With incoherent thought
Quiet and whimsical
Like that of dreamscapes
And oceans

Tranquil
      Listening
              Intent

Deeper than
The soul
And the heart
That awaits
Their harvesting gaze

Perfect

In silent oblivion
And at one
With the subconscious
Of the night
And the moon
That dances for
Their Alliance
Into pure beauty

Perfect
      Wanting
            Surreal

Tender eyes

Author notes

well in all honesty was a product of pure boredom..... lol

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  • myrataal silver member
    March 8

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    Eyes are always the origin:

    of sight, fountains and of beginnings. How well you expressed all the sentiments you felt. Even in boredom.

    How are you Poetess?

    Love
    Myra

  • Cwm
    July 5, 2008

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    Wow, wow, impressive very vivid hun! I'm proud of you... we waited awhile for another poem but worth the wait...

  • hiddenprey
    July 3, 2008

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    this is brillant - as always , about time you went back to writing .. my first comment *add yay icon here*